Thursday 25 April 2013

Savannah's poem

Spring

One tweeting bird was spotted to day flapped its wings and flew away .
Blossom budding on the cold , hard rocky floor .
Children are playing up and down while parents are relaxing for now.
Farmers are growing vegetables and milking cows and enjoying the great outdoors.
So its time for you and me to have some fun as well .

3 comments:

  1. I loved reading this poem! SaWell done!

    I especially liked the image of the blossom on the cold, hard rocky ground!

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  2. Savannah your poem is the best in the world.
    i loved the way you used brilliant adjectives .
    i would love to write a poem like you.

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  3. Wow savannah awesome poem I would like you to make another poem so we can read it.

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