Tuesday 21 May 2013

Writing we are proud of this week...

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6 comments:

  1. First of all , I believe that organic food tastes better because its freshly picked and well cared for by farmers .It has no artificial colours or flavours and therefore your kids won't be hypo active . In addition it doesn't poison tiny little cute animals or colourful wild plants .

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    1. Lovely adjectives and connectives!

      I think you meant 'hyperactive'

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  2. Would you like the taste of nature to take you to a whole new world ? Mouthwatering food which changes our taster buds .Come on try it and discover new tastes .

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  3. Firstly , I believe organic food is terrible because you pay more mone . Secondly you will not be able to give all the amazing. Kid's their dinner. Finally there is no scientific evidence that it's better for you so it's just a waste of money.this is my mane bode of my letter for mrs b. I am proud of this work because I said all the reason agents organic food .

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  4. I think you meant to write:

    This is my main body of my letter for Mrs Barrett. I am proud of this work because I said all the reason AGAINST organic food .

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  5. 10 th June 2013

    My perfect paragraph

    As the parked up the rusty old shabby van the birds tweeted joyfully and flapped their wings delicately . The chickens pecked wildly at the tiny seeds and there was a loud earbursting " Neigh " ! Coming from the scarlet and white barn .The tiny house was lent to one side . By Katie g 4el

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